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My world crumbles down.
As I gaze out the window,
All hope vanishes.

Tears dissolve vision
As Lament envelops me
In his icy hands.

Color turns to grey
As redness creeps over me.
I'm lost forever.
Greetings everyone! It's been a while. I wrote this haiku suite months ago, but just kept it in my folder. Today, I decided to upload it. Hope you like it.
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IntricateSunlight Mar 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Whoa, this has a certain power to it. I especially like the capitalization of 'Lament', it really makes it stand out and makes it even more expressive. Great job.
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Manigran Mar 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much! I really appreciate it.
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punx-chan89 Jan 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I really like this thanks for sharing :)
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Manigran Jan 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You're very welcome. And thank you for your comment.
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punx-chan89 Jan 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
no problem keep up the good work :)
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:iconjack0998:
They are nice! It had been a while yes ;) how are you? ;)
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Manigran Jan 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you. I'm doing very well; just busy with studies. How are you?
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:iconjack0998:
Exactly the same, as you can see ;) i never find a moment for looking at my da messages or the people i watched ^^
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Manigran Jan 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Me as well. I'll be more active on deviantART in a few months time, since I'll have some more time to write.
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lombregrise Jan 9, 2013  Professional Writer
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